Archive for August, 2009

Aug 30 2009

Killing Sacred Cows in Publishing: Speed

Published by dwsmith under Misc

This is the first chapter, actually not the actual first chapter, but a chapter in a book I am putting together called Killing the Sacred Cows of Publishing. Given time, this will all come together and be sold in New York somewhere.

A good alternate title for this book might be Killing the Myths of Publishing. Over the years in teaching young professional writers and talking with more experienced professional writers, it has become clear to me that there are some huge myths about the publishing industry and creative fiction writing in general.

Kris (Kristine Kathryn Rusch) and I have made it a mission to knock down some of these myths when we go to writer’s conferences and in our workshops here. And the reaction is always in a range between “Now I understand” to anger and name-calling when the myth we try to dislodge is a central belief of a writer.

That said, I don’t expect everyone to agree with my positions here, and I welcome comments, which on some of these posts is half the fun, and will help direct me and allow me to talk about other sacred cows (myths) as time goes on. But remember before you yell at me in anger, I have sold over 90 novels in just about every genre and been making a living writing fiction for over 20 years now. I have also been a publisher and an editor. So make your arguments reasonable.

With all that said, here we go after the first sacred cow.

Speed of writing.

Or said in myth fashion: WRITING SLOW EQUALS WRITING WELL.

Or the flip side: WRITING FAST EQUALS WRITING POORLY.

This comes out of everyone’s mouth at one point or another in a form of apology for our work. “Oh, I just cranked that off.”

Or the flip side… “This is some of my best work. I’ve been writing it for over a year.”

Now this silly idea that the writing process has anything at all to do with quality of the work has been around in publishing for just over 100 years now, pushed mostly by the literature side and the college professors and made worse by the pulp magazine era. It has no basis in any real fact when it comes to writers. None. If you don’t believe me, start researching how fast some of the classics of literature were written.

But don’t ask major professional writers out in public. Remember we know this myth and lie about how really hard we do work. (Yup, that’s right, someone who makes stuff up for a living will lie to you. Go figure.) So you have to get a long-term professional writer in a private setting. Then maybe with a few drinks under his belt the pro will tell you the truth about any project.

So, let me put out my position clearly right up front and then discuss this topic.

My position: NO WRITER IS THE SAME. NO PROJECT IS THE SAME.

And put simply: THE QUALITY OF THE FINAL PRODUCT HAS NO RELATIONSHIP TO THE SPEED, METHOD, OR FEELING OF THE WRITER WHILE WRITING.

That’s right, one day I could write some pages feeling sick, almost too tired to care, where every word is a pain, and the next day I write a few more pages feeling good and the words flowing freely and a week later I won’t be able to tell which day was which from the writing. How I feel when I write makes no difference to the quality of what I produce. None. Damn it, it should, but it just doesn’t.

And I just laugh when a myth like this one attempts to lump all writers into the same boat and make us all write exactly the same way book after book after book. No writer works the same, even from book to book or short story to short story. Talk to any writer, and I mean privately, getting them to tell you the truth, not the public line, and you will discover that one of the writer’s books was written quickly, maybe even in a few weeks, while another book took the writer a half year to finish and he was deathly ill during half the writing time. And you, as a reader, reading the two books, would never be able to tell the difference.

But yet, New York publishing, college professors, and just about anyone who even thinks about the writer behind the words has a belief system that words must be struggled over to be good. Well, yes, sometimes.

And sometimes not.

Sometimes a writer gets into a white-hot heat and a book flows faster than the writer can type, getting done in just a number of days or weeks. And sometimes it just doesn’t work that way.

Sometimes a writer has a deadline to hit and pushes to hit it, writing fast. Some writers think and research a book for a few months, then write it in a few weeks. Some writers spend a month or two on a detailed outline, then take a month to actually write the book. Some writers start with a title, some write chapters out of order and then put it all together like a puzzle. And on and on and on.

Every writer is different. Every writer’s method is different

There is no correct, mandated way to write a book.

For a moment let me talk about why the myth of writing slow to write better actually hurts writers.

There are two sides of our brains. The creative side and the critical side. The creative side has been taking in stories since the writer started reading, knowing how to put words together at a deep level. The critical side lags far, far behind the creative side, learning rules that some English teacher or parent forced into the critical mind. The creative side is always a much better writer than the critical side. Always. It never switches, no matter how long you write.

Long term (20 years and up) professional writers have learned to trust that creative side and we tend to not mess much with what it creates for us. Of course, this lesson for most of us was learned the hard way, but that’s another long post.

A new writer who believes the myth that all good fiction must be written slowly and labor-intensive (called work) suddenly one day finds that they have written a thousand words in 25 minutes. The new writer automatically thinks, “Oh, my, that has to be crap. I had better rewrite it.”

What has just happened is that the top writing the creative side of the mind had just produced is then killed by the critical side, dumbed down, voice taken out, anything good and interesting removed. All caused by this myth.

And professional agents and editors in New York are no better, sadly. I once got a rewrite request on a major book. I agreed with about 9/10’s of the suggestions so spent the next day rewriting the book, fixing the problems, and was about to send the manuscript back when Kris stopped me. The conversation went something like this:

“Don’t send it, sit on it a few weeks,” Kris said, looking firm and intense, as only Kris can look.

“Why not?” I asked, not remembering at that moment that the myth was a major part of New York publishing.

“The editor will think you didn’t work on it and that it is crap,” Kris said.

“But I agreed and fixed everything,” I said, starting to catch a clue, but not yet willing to admit defeat.

Kris just gave me that “stare” and I wilted, knowing she was completely correct.

I held the rewrite for three weeks, sent it back with a letter praising the rewrite comments and a slight side comment about how hard I had worked on them. Story ended happily because Kris remembered the myth and how it functions.

Now, let me do something that just annoys people, especially in the master classes we teach. I’m going to do the math. (Stop laughing, former students.)

This chapter when finished is going to be around 1,750 words. That is about 7 manuscript pages with each page averaging 250 words per page.

So say I wrote only 250 words, one page per day on a new novel. It takes me about 15 minutes, give-or-take (depending on the book and the day and how I’m feeling) to write 250 words of fiction. So if I spent that 15 minutes per day writing on a novel, every day for one year, I would finish a 90,000 word plus novel, about a normal paperback book, in 365 days.

I would be a one-book-per-year writer, pretty standard in science fiction and a few other genres.

Oh, my, if I worked really, really hard and managed to get 30 minutes of writing in per day, I could finish two novels in a year. And at that speed I would be considered fast. God forbid I actually write four pages a day, spend an entire hour per day, and finish four novels a year. At that point I would be praised in the romance genre and called a hack in other genres.

See why I laugh to myself when some writer tells me they have been working really, really hard on a book and it took them a year to write? What did they do for 23 hours and 45 minutes every day?

The problem is they are lost in the myth. Deep into the myth that writing must be work, that it must be hard, that you must “suffer for your art” and write slowly.

Bull-puckey. Writing is fun, easy, and enjoyable. If you want hard work, go dig a ditch for a water pipe on a golf course in a steady rain on a cold day. That’s work. Sitting at a computer and making stuff up just isn’t work. It’s a dream job.

So, the idea that Writing Slow Equals Writing Better is a complete myth, a nasty sacred cow of publishing that hurts and stops writers who believe it.

The truth is that no two writers work the same and no book is the same as the previous book or the next book. There should be no rule about speed relating to quality at all.

Sadly, this myth is firm in the business, so writers have to learn to work around it, to play the game that teachers, editors, book reviewers, and fans want us to play. On the public front, with every book we write, we must play the game of the myth.

Just don’t do the math about my age. I sold my first novel when I was 38 and have published over 90 novels. At one book per year, I must be at least 128 years old. After my hard page of writing every day, I sometimes feel that way.

Yeah, right. But I stand by that story.

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Notice below that I have added onto this series of chapters a donate button where you can donate if you feel these chapters of this upcoming book helped you in some way and you want to keep me writing them. And if you can’t afford to donate, please feel free to pass this article along to others who might get some help from it. Every week I will be adding a new chapter on the myths and sacred cows of publishing. Stay tuned. Upcoming are chapters on rewriting, agents, bestsellers, and so much more. This business has a lot of myths. An entire book full.

Thanks, Dean

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Aug 24 2009

2010 Workshop Schedule

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I’m first going to give the schedule, them describe some of the workshops following the schedule. Any questions, or if you would like to sign up, please e-mail me.

These workshops range over different skill levels and a few have limitations, so please read the descriptions following carefully and feel free to ask questions. We have tried to schedule some workshops close together to save on travel costs. All workshops are held on the Oregon Coast. All rooms are reserved for you automatically when you sign up, so need to worry about that either.

I will also have this schedule posted under the workshop tab and every-so-often I will talk in length about a certain workshop here. Feel free to pass this post along to anyone you feel might be interested.

———————— 2010 WORKSHOP SCHEDULE —————————–

——– February ———–

NOVEL WORKSHOP. Feb 20-23, 2010. (Starts at 7 PM on the 20th). Cost $200. Limited to 12. Room Rate $40.00
DENISE LITTLE SHORT STORY WORKSHOP. Feb. 25-28. (Starts 7PM on the 25th, ends noon on 28th). Cost $500. Room Rate $40.00

——— March ———-

MARKETING WORKSHOP. March 13-20 (Starts 7 PM on the 13th, ends late 20th). Cost $600. Limited to 14. Room Rate $40.00

———- April ———–

CHARACTER VOICES WORKSHOP. April 10-17 (Starts 7 PM on the 10th, ends late 17th). Cost $600. Limited to 14. Room Rate $40.00

———- May ————

MYSTERY WRITING WORKSHOP. May 15-22. (Starts 7 PM on the 15th, ends late 22nd). Cost $600. Limited to 20 Master Class Graduates Only. Room Rate $40.00

———- June ————

AGENT WORKSHOP. June 11-13. (Starts 7 PM on the 11th, ends noon 13th). Cost $300. Room Rate $50.00
NOVEL WORKSHOP. June 14-17. (Starts at 7 PM on the 14th). Cost $200. Limited to 12. Room Rate $50.00
MONEY MANAGEMENT FOR WRITERS. June 18-20 (Starts 7 PM on 18th, ends noon 20th). Cost $300. Room Rate $50.00

———- July ————

MYSTERY STRUCTURE. July 16-19. (Starts 7 PM on the 16th). Cost $300. Room Rate $60.00
PITCHES AND BLURBS. July 23-25 (Starts 7 PM on 23rd, ends noon 25th). Cost $300. Room Rate $60.00

———- September ————

FICTION CAREER WORKSHOP (Kris and Dean Show). Sept 11-12.(Starts 10 AM on the 11th, ends 5PM 12th). Cost $300. Room Rate $50.00. Workshop open to anyone at any level. A complete overview of the publishing industry from how to write a sellable story or novel to what happens in editor’s office and much more.

CHARACTER VOICES WORKSHOP. Sept.18-25 (Starts 7 PM on the 18th, ends late 25th). Cost $600. Limited to 14. Room Rate $50.00

———- October ————

NOVEL WORKSHOP. Oct 10-13. (Starts at 7 PM on the 10th). Cost $200. Limited to 12. Room Rate $40.00
NEW TECHNOLOGY. Oct. 14–16 (Starts 7 PM on 14th, ends noon 16th). Cost $300. Room Rate $40.00
MARKETING WORKSHOP. Oct 16-23 (Starts 7 PM on the 16th, ends late 23th). Cost $600. Limited to 14. Room Rate $40.00

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DESCRIPTION OF THE 2010 WRITERS WORKSHOPS

——– February ———–

NOVEL WORKSHOP. Feb 20-23, 2010. (Starts at 7 PM on the 20th). Cost $200. Limited to 12. Room Rate $40.00

Taught by Dean Wesley Smith with feedback from New York editor John Douglas.

The novel workshops are at first, a standard critique weekend. Each writer must have a novel completed one month before the workshop. Each writer will send everyone one month ahead of time the first 50 pages, a short proposal, and a query letter addressed to an editor. Everyone will read those pages, as well as one or two people including Dean will read the full novel. After your critique, you will be required to fix anything wrong in the query letter, the proposal, and first 20 pages of the book, then before you leave at the end of three days, mail the story to five editors. So this is a writing and mailing workshop as well as a critique workshop.

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DENISE LITTLE SHORT STORY WORKSHOP. Feb. 25-28. (Starts 7PM on the 25th, ends noon on 28th). Cost $500. Room Rate $40.00

Taught by Denise Little and Dean Wesley Smith.

Denise Little is the Executive Editor of Tekno Books, the packaging company that does a vast majority of the paperback and hardback anthologies, plus novels and other projects. You will be required to send a story in written to order before the workshop as well as write a second short story during the workshop. An intense but fun writing workshop.
——— March ———-

MARKETING WORKSHOP. March 13-20 (Starts 7 PM on the 13th, ends late 20th). Cost $600. Limited to 14. Room Rate $40.00

Taught by Kristine Kathryn Rusch and Dean Wesley Smith.

This workshop, flatly and simply, will give you all the tools you need to sell novels. You will learn how to write top proposals, top query letters, and all about agents, including how to hire one, when to fire one, and when and for what they are needed. We have done this three times before and everyone who attends says it is a critical workshop. It will jump you years ahead in selling novels. Very intense writing workshop. Open to all levels, but better if you have finished a novel and tried to sell it already.

———- April ———–

CHARACTER VOICES WORKSHOP. April 10-17 (Starts 7 PM on the 10th, ends late 17th). Cost $600. Limited to 14. Room Rate $40.00

Taught by Dean Wesley Smith and Kristine Kathryn Rusch.

In our modern world of publishing, if you can’t do distinctive character voice, you are at a huge disadvantage. If your readers having trouble telling your characters apart, if your work seems always flat and you’re getting form or short letter rejections, chances are your characters have no voice and this workshop is for you. A very intense week of writing. Open to all levels.

———- May ————

MYSTERY WRITING WORKSHOP. May 15-22. (Starts 7 PM on the 15th, ends late 22nd). Cost $600. Limited to 20. Room Rate $40.00

Open only to Master Class Graduates.

———- June ————

AGENT WORKSHOP. June 11-13. (Starts 7 PM on the 11th, ends noon 13th). Cost $300. Room Rate $50.00

Taught by Kristine Kathryn Rusch and Dean Wesley Smith

Everything you need to know about Agents. How to research one that would be right for you, how to interview an agent, how to know when your agent isn’t working for you, how to fire one, what to expect from an agent and when and why. This weekend workshop could save you years of mistakes. Trust me, Kris and I know this one from hard knocks. Open to all levels.

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NOVEL WORKSHOP. June 14-17. (Starts at 7 PM on the 14th). Cost $200. Limited to 12. Room Rate $50.00

(See details above. Same as February novel workshop.)

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MONEY MANAGEMENT FOR WRITERS. June 18-20 (Starts 7 PM on 18th, ends noon 20th). Cost $300. Room Rate $50.00

Taught by Kristine Kathryn Rusch and Dean Wesley Smith

Pretty much the name of the workshop says it all. Everything a writer needs to know about money management, how money flows, how to make more of it and get different cash streams working for you from your fiction. Open to all levels.

———- July ————

MYSTERY STRUCTURE. July 16-19. (Starts 7 PM on the 16th). Cost $300. Room Rate $60.00

Taught by Dean Wesley Smith and Kristine Kathryn Rusch

The structure of all the different types of mystery stories and subgenres and how to write in them. Open to all levels.

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PITCHES AND BLURBS. July 23-25 (Starts 7 PM on 23rd, ends noon 25th). Cost $300. Room Rate $60.00

This is a critical workshop for those who can’t seem to describe their own work in one paragraph in an exciting and grabbing way. An intense writing weekend. You will leave knowing how to write pitches and blurbs. Open to all levels.

———- September ————

FICTION CAREER WORKSHOP (Kris and Dean Show). Sept 11-12, 2010.(Starts 10 AM on the 11th, ends 5PM 12th). Cost $300. Room Rate $50.00. Workshop open to anyone at any level. A complete overview of the publishing industry from how to write a sellable story or novel to what happens in editor’s office and much more. Open to all levels.

(I did an entire post about this workshop earlier in the year.)

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CHARACTER VOICES WORKSHOP. Sept.18-25, 2010 (Starts 7 PM on the 18th, ends late 25th). Cost $600. Limited to 14. Room Rate $50.00

(Same as Character Voices workshop above.)

———- October ————

NOVEL WORKSHOP. Oct 10-13, 2010. (Starts at 7 PM on the 10th). Cost $200. Limited to 12. Room Rate $40.00

(Same as Novel workshop in February)

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NEW TECHNOLOGY. Oct. 14–16, 2010 (Starts 7 PM on 14th, ends noon 16th). Cost $300. Room Rate $40.00

(Taught by a number of people, going into the ways writers can use Kindle, eBooks, POD and anything new by then to make money and sell more copies of their stories.) Open to all levels.

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MARKETING WORKSHOP. Oct 16-23, 2010 (Starts 7 PM on the 16th, ends late 23th). Cost $600. Limited to 14. Room Rate $40.00

(Same as Marketing workshop in March)

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Aug 12 2009

Stages of a Writer

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Before I get to the new series of posts about killing sacred cows of publishing, I wanted to just toss this idea out there.

For a while, I played at playing semi-professional poker, traveling to tournaments, and learning as much as I could from every source I could. (I have a full shelf unit of poker books.) And, as a writer, I liked watching people as well at the poker table, and I came to some conclusions backed up in different ways by different poker experts. Basically, boiled down into my words, there are four basic types of hold’em poker players.

Beginner: This player looks at his cards and that’s all that matters. Often they wouldn’t know a good starting hand, and any two cards suited seems to get this level of player excited. They seldom fold and couldn’t care what any other player is doing, or even what cards are on the board. They are always surprised when they lose.

Intermediate: This player knows decent starting hands, pays attention to the cards on the board, and sometimes even pays attention to other players, but more often than not just gets angry when someone is pushing a pot they want to draw at cheaply. They blame the dealer, blame other players, and want deck changes. They have no real idea what another player has in their hand and often think they should have won a pot when all the clues were telling them otherwise. These players are fond of telling you what cards they laid down that would have won.

Medium Professional: These players fold a lot, are often aggressive players, and know good starting hands. Their focus is still mostly their own cards, but they also can read a flop and have a good idea of what the other players at the table are playing. They win more than they lose and sometimes score big. They are sometimes hard to read, have a vast amount of patience, and can grind out over hours a decent living. Their focus is not only on their own cards, but a great deal on other players and what they hold. They can read some players and can sometimes win with bad hands.

Top Professionals: These players often don’t care a lick what their two cards are, except in showdown situations. Their only focus is WHAT THE OTHER PLAYER THINKS THEY HAVE. They play upper level games and love playing against other players who understand top play as well. They can seem to read your mind, and are fantastic at blocking any reads on themselves. Their table image is critical. They can shift gears instantly from aggressive play to conservative play as situations demand. Again, their main concern is what the other player thinks they have, not what two cards they actually have. It’s why beginning players watch a top player on television win with bad cards and think they can do the same thing at their local poker room. At this level, the cards are secondary in importance.

Now, take that over to writing and let me play through the stages of being a writer.

Beginner:

These writers are focused only on one thing: Writing a good sentence. To this level of writers, sentence-by-sentence writing is all that matters. No clue how to actually build a story or characters or pacing or anything else. Beginners think pretty sentences equal good writing.

Intermediate:

This writer is still focused on sentences, but glimmering of story process is starting to come through. Often this writer does something naturally well and gets praised for it, but this level writer often gets lost and trapped for years in workshops, where people tell them about their sentences, about their grammar, about their syntax, and so on. Understanding story is just a glimmering on the edges and story has no focus to this writer. Writing is still sentences and heaven forbid you change viewpoint in a chapter or paragraph. This level of writer follows “rules” completely.

Early Professional:

This level is starting to get “good” rejections. This writer is starting to understand some of the surface levels of story telling, that plotting and pacing and character voice and cliffhangers are involved beyond just sentences. But mostly the thinking is still just on sentences. This level writer might actually sell a story or two to lower levels, but has no idea what they did correctly in the story that sold. The major flaw with this writer is rewriting. They think that constant rewriting makes a story better instead of actually killing it. You hear these people tell you proudly that they have done a dozen rewrites on something. Of course, they have no idea in each rewrite what is better or worse, but they believe that rewriting always makes things better. Many writers at this level get frustrated and give up after coming close or selling one or two stories. They are also still very trapped by the rules of everything.

Young Selling Professional:

This level of writer has sold some stories, maybe even a few novels. These writers have all the basics of craft under control but often don’t understand that there are higher levels of craft learning yet to come. They are mostly out of workshops that focus on sentences, and their own focus is mostly on story. The good ones, the ones that will continue to move up, are understanding that you can never learn it all in the craft side of writing. They have learned or are starting to learn how to study writing, to get beyond sentences and really look at story structure, at pacing, at character voice, at cliffhangers, at openings and endings and even theme. At this level it is usually a poor decision or two on the business side that stops them, often agents who tell them to rewrite, often bad sales numbers on a book, or worse yet, someone ripping them off in some scam or another. But if this writer’s true passion to tell stories wins over the downturns, they will move onward because they have learned to study and just keep writing. This level of writer is starting to understand that not all the rules are good rules.

Professional Midlist Writers:

Writers in this group are often long term writers who have weathered a ton of business problems, who have kept learning about story and about craft of story, about character voice, about all the thousands of details that make up a good story well told. Often writers in this group have between 50 and 300 novels under their belts, and still love the art, still work to get better. Some are moderate bestsellers, others not. They have been making a decent to great living for a long time and will often tell a bunch of younger writers they were just “lucky.” No real luck involved. This bunch just kept going, kept learning story, and love what they do. This group tends to follow its own rules. I fit right in here.

Long Term Bestsellers:

These writers are the master of story telling, their books can get hundreds and hundreds of thousands of readers to buy them every book. They could not care about sentence by sentence quality for the most part, with everything they do focused on the purpose of moving a story forward and keeping a reader reading. Although some of them are fantastic stylists and it fits with their stories. They are mind control experts, able to make readers all over the planet think exactly what they want them to think at any given moment in their books. They understand completely that there is an audience and readers on the other side of the words and they know the expectations of readers. They know when a reader wants something and gives it to them perfectly. Not every reader will like every bestselling writer, but that just boils down to reader taste. The long term bestseller gives his or her readers exactly what they want. They are the masters of storytelling in all its art.

So, just tossed this in for summer fun. Starting soon a series of posts about killing the sacred cows of publishing. Stay tuned.

Cheers, Dean

Copyright 2009 Dean Wesley Smith

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Aug 12 2009

Great Look At A Thriller

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J. Steven York did a great look at a failed thriller, why it failed, and so much more about writing.  A great post worth reading for any writer of any genre. Take a look here.

Cheers, Dean

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Aug 03 2009

Streak Time plus New Posts coming

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Folks, those of you with streaks running that want me to list you on the streak page, e-mail me your total.  I will update the page tomorrow and then next week.

Kris and I have the complete list of workshops we’re going to do next year and I will be posting that here next week as well and update the workshops page. Some will only be open to more advanced pros, but others are open to anyone chasing the fiction writing dream.

And also starting next week is a new series of posts. The Life After posts were fun, but pretty much covered what I wanted to cover with those. I have a stand-alone post called The Stages of Writers that I want to do first, then I will start a series of posts called Killing the Sacred Cows of Publishing. One at a time, I’m going to take a look at the myths of writing fiction, how they got started, and why they stop or hurt so many writers. So far I have a list of about eight major myths or sacred cows of publishing. I have a hunch a few more will pop up as it goes along.

40th High School Reunion coming up later this week. How did I get this old?

Cheer, Dean

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